Summary

plan to fallow Light’s advice to make more comments on my friend's blog (Light,2009.07.08), because that will help me studying English more. Chisako also had a good idea to "I must devise my blog's layout" (Chisako. 2009.07.08), because I will enjoy put my blog by that.Yumi suggested to paste a lot of pictures (Yumi, 2009. 07. 08). It makes me enjoy. What is more, reader is interested in my blog. I also agree with Yurina's opinion I should write more words(Yurina, 2009.07.07). My blog was also written by short English words. I often write blog, but I can't write a long English sentence. I will try to write a long English sentence at the second semester. Aya is good idea "I must include some links and informations"(Aya, 2009.07.29) I think I should have pasted some links on my blog. If there were links on my blog, some people think "What is this?", and may read my blog. I can make my blog more interesting.

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