I have two favorite places. One is Okinawa, and second is my room. I can’t go to Okinawa soon. I have to save money, and make much time. It is hard, but if I go there, I will be glad and heal my hart very much. Okinawa to the contrary, I can go to my room anytime. I am in my room everyday. My room's atmosphere is only one in the world so I like them. A common point is those are quiet place and When I am there, I can be calm and forget my troubles.
I have gone to Okinawa three times. I want to go to Okinawa more, but it is a little far from Kumamoto. I like the view and climate of the Okinawa . There are beautiful blue sky and gigantic columns of clouds. Okinawa's sea is clear and it is beautiful, but I have never swum in Okinawa. If I go to Okinawa next time, I will swim in Okinawa. A comfortable breeze often blow in Okinawa. I like exposing myself to the wind. The breeze makes me happy. When I am in Okinawa, and watching the view, I can forget my troubles.
My room is also quiet place. Sometimes I listen to music I like. There are big cushion and cute stuffed I like. I often sleep on the cushion. I like reading comics, and there are many comic books that I like in my room. When I am in my room, I do nothing but read comic books. I often read comic books listening to music. When I am in my room, I am surrounded by many things that I like and I can forget my troubles.
I have two places that I like. Both of them are quiet place. When I am in both of them, I can forget my troubles. I can forget my troubles by watching Okinawa’s beautiful view or reading comic books listening to music. These places are necessary for me.
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2009年10月30日金曜日
Essey2-02a website
I researched about Diseneyland's website. About two informations are pasted on the website. One is about disney. The other is about disneyland. So we can collect about both disney and disneyland's information. Disney and Disneyland gives many people dream. This website give us dream, too. This website is cute, and like the land of dreams.
First, Disney's informations are pasted on top of the website. It's size is smaller than that of desnyland, but there are many fun menus, and disney characters. We can watch some desney's short movies. The short movies are about a new disney movie or many disney movies. Although the movies are very short, it is fun and can enjoy. We also listen to music. There are recip's special section. Many food's pictures are pasted, and we click the food which we want to eat. Then, the racipe for the food is appear, so we can make the food which is like princess eating. We can also buy disney goods on the website. There are cute disney goods picture on it. These are pasted too many to choose. What is more, we can play disney game on the website. There are five kinds of games. It is fun. We can enjoy it.
Second, Disneyland's information is main, so pasted big. We can make a reservation disneyland hotel and buy tickets thorough the website. It is usuful. There are many informations about disneyland. For example, information that Hlloween party will be held in disneyland soon. You can get free admission, if you go to disneyland on your birthday. We can explore many spots through the website. Disneyland Park, Disney's california Adventure Park, Downtown Disney Distrikt. All of them are looks exciting. I have never been to Disneyland, but I really want to go there! I think this disneyland website is usuful. There are many funny informations on this website.
Disney and Disneyland give many people many dreams. Many disney characters are admired by many people all over the world. So this website is also like a dreamland. We can be excited only watch this website and enjoy. This website is good.
http://disneyland.disney.go.com/disneyland/en_US/home/home?name=HomePage
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First, Disney's informations are pasted on top of the website. It's size is smaller than that of desnyland, but there are many fun menus, and disney characters. We can watch some desney's short movies. The short movies are about a new disney movie or many disney movies. Although the movies are very short, it is fun and can enjoy. We also listen to music. There are recip's special section. Many food's pictures are pasted, and we click the food which we want to eat. Then, the racipe for the food is appear, so we can make the food which is like princess eating. We can also buy disney goods on the website. There are cute disney goods picture on it. These are pasted too many to choose. What is more, we can play disney game on the website. There are five kinds of games. It is fun. We can enjoy it.
Second, Disneyland's information is main, so pasted big. We can make a reservation disneyland hotel and buy tickets thorough the website. It is usuful. There are many informations about disneyland. For example, information that Hlloween party will be held in disneyland soon. You can get free admission, if you go to disneyland on your birthday. We can explore many spots through the website. Disneyland Park, Disney's california Adventure Park, Downtown Disney Distrikt. All of them are looks exciting. I have never been to Disneyland, but I really want to go there! I think this disneyland website is usuful. There are many funny informations on this website.
Disney and Disneyland give many people many dreams. Many disney characters are admired by many people all over the world. So this website is also like a dreamland. We can be excited only watch this website and enjoy. This website is good.
http://disneyland.disney.go.com/disneyland/en_US/home/home?name=HomePage
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2009年10月28日水曜日
2-02a
1Quick post: short list 2-3 posts you might review
inclide page title and URL
your initial impressions
2Draft essay posts 2-02a
Labels: drafts esseys genre reviews websites
-due by noon Fri
inclide page title and URL
your initial impressions
2Draft essay posts 2-02a
Labels: drafts esseys genre reviews websites
-due by noon Fri
2009年10月21日水曜日
Revise essaeys 2-1a-b Favorite place
I have two favorite places. One is Okinawa, and second is my room. I can’t go to Okinawa soon. I have to save money, and make much time. It is hard, but if I go there, I will be glad and heal my hart very much. Okinawa to the contrary, I can go to my room anytime. I am in my room everyday. My room's atmosphere is only one in the world. I like them. A common point is those are quiet place and When I am there, I can be calm and forget my troubles.
I have gone to Okinawa three times. I want to go to Okinawa more, but it is a little far from Kumamoto. I like the view and climate of the Okinawa . There are beautiful blue sky and gigantic columns of clouds. Okinawa's sea is clear and it is beautiful, but I have never swum in Okinawa. If I go to Okinawa next time, I will swim in Okinawa. A comfortable breeze often blow in Okinawa. I like exposing myself to the wind. The breeze makes me happy. When I am in Okinawa, and watching the view, I can forget my troubles.
My room is quiet place. Sometimes I listen to music I like. There are big cushion and cute stuffed I like. I often sleep on the cushion. I like reading comics, and there are many comic books that I like in my room. When I am in my room, I do nothing but read comic books. I often read comic books listening to music. When I am in my room, I am surrounded by many things that I like and I can forget my troubles.
I have two places that I like. Both of them are quiet place. When I am in both of them, I can forget my troubles. I can forget my troubles by watching Okinawa’s beautiful view or reading comic books listening to music. These places are necessary for me.
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I have gone to Okinawa three times. I want to go to Okinawa more, but it is a little far from Kumamoto. I like the view and climate of the Okinawa . There are beautiful blue sky and gigantic columns of clouds. Okinawa's sea is clear and it is beautiful, but I have never swum in Okinawa. If I go to Okinawa next time, I will swim in Okinawa. A comfortable breeze often blow in Okinawa. I like exposing myself to the wind. The breeze makes me happy. When I am in Okinawa, and watching the view, I can forget my troubles.
My room is quiet place. Sometimes I listen to music I like. There are big cushion and cute stuffed I like. I often sleep on the cushion. I like reading comics, and there are many comic books that I like in my room. When I am in my room, I do nothing but read comic books. I often read comic books listening to music. When I am in my room, I am surrounded by many things that I like and I can forget my troubles.
I have two places that I like. Both of them are quiet place. When I am in both of them, I can forget my troubles. I can forget my troubles by watching Okinawa’s beautiful view or reading comic books listening to music. These places are necessary for me.
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Thank you for comments everybady!
>>Yusuke
thank you for comments. I also think Okinawan dilect is interesting. I want you to go to Okinawa soon!
>>Yuribooooh
Thank you for comments. I don't feel lonely. Because I can read many comic books, and it is fun!
>>aya
Thank you for camments.
Oh! did you write about your room? How do your room looks like? I want to read it!
>>chisako
I think Tyuraumi suizokukann is the best spot in Okinawa. It is the biggest aquarium in Japan, and also watch beautiful sea from there. Please go there!
Light>>If we can graduate from KGU,and get a job, let's go to Okinawa together! I'm looking forward to do it.
Pika>>Thank you forcomments. I ate umibudou. It is unuseful food. It eat with Ponu. I like it, but it is only Okinawa. If you go to Okinawa, please eat it!
Sayaka>>Oooooh! Sorry, Sayaka. I have some Okinawa's picture, and I should have paste it on my blog essay. I have forgotten quite! Thank you for idea and advice.
Saki>>Hi Saki! Thank you for comment. I recommend you going to Turaumi aquarium. You will feel be struck by the grandeur of sea and life.
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thank you for comments. I also think Okinawan dilect is interesting. I want you to go to Okinawa soon!
>>Yuribooooh
Thank you for comments. I don't feel lonely. Because I can read many comic books, and it is fun!
>>aya
Thank you for camments.
Oh! did you write about your room? How do your room looks like? I want to read it!
>>chisako
I think Tyuraumi suizokukann is the best spot in Okinawa. It is the biggest aquarium in Japan, and also watch beautiful sea from there. Please go there!
Light>>If we can graduate from KGU,and get a job, let's go to Okinawa together! I'm looking forward to do it.
Pika>>Thank you forcomments. I ate umibudou. It is unuseful food. It eat with Ponu. I like it, but it is only Okinawa. If you go to Okinawa, please eat it!
Sayaka>>Oooooh! Sorry, Sayaka. I have some Okinawa's picture, and I should have paste it on my blog essay. I have forgotten quite! Thank you for idea and advice.
Saki>>Hi Saki! Thank you for comment. I recommend you going to Turaumi aquarium. You will feel be struck by the grandeur of sea and life.
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2009年10月10日土曜日
Speeking About Kana!
I will talk about Kana Miura. She is KGU student and 20 years old. Her birthday is 6.16 and type of blood is A but she looks B type. I met Kana at KGU. First I didn't talk with Kana, but I and Kana have made a good friend all too soon. Her personality is cool and a little reticent person. Her personality is different from my personality, but I like her and we get along with each other. Sometimes she said funny thing like a joke and I often laugh at the joke. Kana is interesting.
Now I will talk about Kana's family. There are 5 people in her family. She is oldest daughter. Her father is a teacher. He teaches about personal computer. I said "I envy you because she can be taught about personal computer when you trouble with personal computer. Although I often use a personal conmuter I don't use my computer well, so If I have a father like yours I will not worry about personal computer" Kana said "You are wrong. I don't be taught about personal cpmputer by my father because I have a quarrel with my father" Then her father's hobby is playing tennis. It is very cool, but Kana have never played tennis. Kana's father is cool.
Her mother is a care worker. She works hard everyday and she is a hard worker. Her hobby is flower arrangement. It is very good hobby. Kana make flower arrangement sometimes, too. Kana made flower arrangement for her mother. I saw it, and it was very cute and hot warming. I want to flower arrangement. Kana's mother is also good person.
She has two younger sister. One of them likes painting a picture, and she is good at painting a picture. Her dream is being a painter. Kana says "My sister is a Otaku." I have met Kana's sister and I thought she looks like a painter! Kana's sister don't resemble to Kana at all and also looks like a kind person. Kana's sister go to college to study about paint in this spring. If she become a painter, I want her to paint my portrait.
Other younger sister is belong to wind instrument music club. She plays the flute. She is good at playing the flute. I have never played the flute, but I want to play the flute. The woman who plays the flute is beautiful and cute. I want Kana's sister to teach me how to play the flute. I have met Kana's sister, she resembles to Kana very well, but she is a kind different from Kana.
Every Kana's family have each hobby and enjoy it. Kana's family is interesting and I like them.
Second I will talk about Kana's university life. She comes to school by bike. It takes about 20 minutes. She comes to school by bus on a rainy day. Her house is near to school, but Kana always say "My house is far from KGU, so it is hard for me to go to school" and I always say "Kana! You are wrong! Listen to me! It takes an hour or an hour and half minutes to go to KGU! My house is farer than yours"
Kana is belongs to club which is called Viva. Viva research on Beverly Hills, and Kane is interested in Beverly Hills. Viva active on every Wednesday, and she takes part in club activity every week. She likes her club and enjoy club activity. I think Viva is a mysterious club. If I have a free time, I want to take part in Viva's club activity.
She warks as a secretary assistance at KGU, so she always works and busy. She has to take part in events on the school, and help management. A chief secretary is cool guy, so I envy her.
Kana is a cool and cute. She enjoy her school life and I will get along with her forever. I am glad to become a friend with Kana.
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Now I will talk about Kana's family. There are 5 people in her family. She is oldest daughter. Her father is a teacher. He teaches about personal computer. I said "I envy you because she can be taught about personal computer when you trouble with personal computer. Although I often use a personal conmuter I don't use my computer well, so If I have a father like yours I will not worry about personal computer" Kana said "You are wrong. I don't be taught about personal cpmputer by my father because I have a quarrel with my father" Then her father's hobby is playing tennis. It is very cool, but Kana have never played tennis. Kana's father is cool.
Her mother is a care worker. She works hard everyday and she is a hard worker. Her hobby is flower arrangement. It is very good hobby. Kana make flower arrangement sometimes, too. Kana made flower arrangement for her mother. I saw it, and it was very cute and hot warming. I want to flower arrangement. Kana's mother is also good person.
She has two younger sister. One of them likes painting a picture, and she is good at painting a picture. Her dream is being a painter. Kana says "My sister is a Otaku." I have met Kana's sister and I thought she looks like a painter! Kana's sister don't resemble to Kana at all and also looks like a kind person. Kana's sister go to college to study about paint in this spring. If she become a painter, I want her to paint my portrait.
Other younger sister is belong to wind instrument music club. She plays the flute. She is good at playing the flute. I have never played the flute, but I want to play the flute. The woman who plays the flute is beautiful and cute. I want Kana's sister to teach me how to play the flute. I have met Kana's sister, she resembles to Kana very well, but she is a kind different from Kana.
Every Kana's family have each hobby and enjoy it. Kana's family is interesting and I like them.
Second I will talk about Kana's university life. She comes to school by bike. It takes about 20 minutes. She comes to school by bus on a rainy day. Her house is near to school, but Kana always say "My house is far from KGU, so it is hard for me to go to school" and I always say "Kana! You are wrong! Listen to me! It takes an hour or an hour and half minutes to go to KGU! My house is farer than yours"
Kana is belongs to club which is called Viva. Viva research on Beverly Hills, and Kane is interested in Beverly Hills. Viva active on every Wednesday, and she takes part in club activity every week. She likes her club and enjoy club activity. I think Viva is a mysterious club. If I have a free time, I want to take part in Viva's club activity.
She warks as a secretary assistance at KGU, so she always works and busy. She has to take part in events on the school, and help management. A chief secretary is cool guy, so I envy her.
Kana is a cool and cute. She enjoy her school life and I will get along with her forever. I am glad to become a friend with Kana.
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2009年10月7日水曜日
2-01a
I like two favorite places.
One is Okinawa. I have gone to Okinawa three times. I want to go to Okinawa more, but it is little far from Kumamoto. I like the view of Okinawa. There are beautiful blue sky and gigantic columns of clouds. What is more, Okinawa's sea is clear and it is beautiful, but I have never swum in Okinawa. If I go to Okinawa next time, I will swim in Okinawa. The view of Okinawa makes me happy and calm. A comfortable breeze often blow in Okinawa. I like exposing myself to the wind. The breeze also makes me happy. I especially want to go to Okinawa in winter, because I have poor circulation and don't like winter season. Okinawa is always hot. I also like climate of Okinawa. Most people in Okinawa is positive view of life and sunny personality. I can makes friends easily in Okinawa. A shopping district in Okinawa is lively and fun. Okinawa's atmosphere is good.
Second is my room. My room is not clear. There are many things in my room. But I like it. If my room is simple or nothing, I will not be able to feel at home. There are big cushion and cute stuffed I like. I like reading comics, and there are many comic books that I like in my room. When I am in my room, I do nothing but read comic books. I often read comic books listening to music. When I am in my room, I am surrounded by many things that I like and I can do what I want to do. My room is gloomy. Of course, a writing desk is well lighted. My room with a cozy ambience.
I have tow places that I like. Both of them are good place. Each places have each merits. I can't go to Okinawa soon. I have to save money, and make much time. It is hard, but if I go there, I will be glad and heal my hart very much. Okinawa to the contray, I can go to my room soon. I am in my room everyday. My room's atmospher is only one in the world!
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One is Okinawa. I have gone to Okinawa three times. I want to go to Okinawa more, but it is little far from Kumamoto. I like the view of Okinawa. There are beautiful blue sky and gigantic columns of clouds. What is more, Okinawa's sea is clear and it is beautiful, but I have never swum in Okinawa. If I go to Okinawa next time, I will swim in Okinawa. The view of Okinawa makes me happy and calm. A comfortable breeze often blow in Okinawa. I like exposing myself to the wind. The breeze also makes me happy. I especially want to go to Okinawa in winter, because I have poor circulation and don't like winter season. Okinawa is always hot. I also like climate of Okinawa. Most people in Okinawa is positive view of life and sunny personality. I can makes friends easily in Okinawa. A shopping district in Okinawa is lively and fun. Okinawa's atmosphere is good.
Second is my room. My room is not clear. There are many things in my room. But I like it. If my room is simple or nothing, I will not be able to feel at home. There are big cushion and cute stuffed I like. I like reading comics, and there are many comic books that I like in my room. When I am in my room, I do nothing but read comic books. I often read comic books listening to music. When I am in my room, I am surrounded by many things that I like and I can do what I want to do. My room is gloomy. Of course, a writing desk is well lighted. My room with a cozy ambience.
I have tow places that I like. Both of them are good place. Each places have each merits. I can't go to Okinawa soon. I have to save money, and make much time. It is hard, but if I go there, I will be glad and heal my hart very much. Okinawa to the contray, I can go to my room soon. I am in my room everyday. My room's atmospher is only one in the world!
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1a-b out line
l Favorite Place
l Climate
Ø Hot
Ø Wind
² Cool wind
² Strong wind
Ø Fine
l View
Ø Blue sky
² Cumulonimbus
Ø Blue sea
Ø nature
l Sound
Ø noise
² Sound of wave
² Sound of wind
l Climate
Ø Hot
Ø Wind
² Cool wind
² Strong wind
Ø Fine
l View
Ø Blue sky
² Cumulonimbus
Ø Blue sea
Ø nature
l Sound
Ø noise
² Sound of wave
² Sound of wind
Speaking
My group member is Kana, Chisako, and Haruna. We named our group "no-man". All of us have no boy friend, so we named like that. I'm glad to give a presentation with this member. We try to give a good presentation, and we want to give a presentation about student's cafeteria. We likes KGU's cafeteria, and often eat there, but we think if there were more menu, we could more enjoy our school life.
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1a-a Brainstorm
Favorite Place
-relax
-enjoy
-not simple
-gloomy
-not quiet
-flesh air
-good smell
-fine view
-Huton
-comfortable
-feel at home
-wind
-relax
-enjoy
-not simple
-gloomy
-not quiet
-flesh air
-good smell
-fine view
-Huton
-comfortable
-feel at home
-wind
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