Revise essaeys 2-1a-b Favorite place

I have two favorite places. One is Okinawa, and second is my room. I can’t go to Okinawa soon. I have to save money, and make much time. It is hard, but if I go there, I will be glad and heal my hart very much. Okinawa to the contrary, I can go to my room anytime. I am in my room everyday. My room's atmosphere is only one in the world. I like them. A common point is those are quiet place and When I am there, I can be calm and forget my troubles.

I have gone to Okinawa three times. I want to go to Okinawa more, but it is a little far from Kumamoto. I like the view and climate of the Okinawa . There are beautiful blue sky and gigantic columns of clouds. Okinawa's sea is clear and it is beautiful, but I have never swum in Okinawa. If I go to Okinawa next time, I will swim in Okinawa. A comfortable breeze often blow in Okinawa. I like exposing myself to the wind. The breeze makes me happy. When I am in Okinawa, and watching the view, I can forget my troubles.

My room is quiet place. Sometimes I listen to music I like. There are big cushion and cute stuffed I like. I often sleep on the cushion. I like reading comics, and there are many comic books that I like in my room. When I am in my room, I do nothing but read comic books. I often read comic books listening to music. When I am in my room, I am surrounded by many things that I like and I can forget my troubles.

I have two places that I like. Both of them are quiet place. When I am in both of them, I can forget my troubles. I can forget my troubles by watching Okinawa’s beautiful view or reading comic books listening to music. These places are necessary for me.

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