esseys 2-01c

I have two favorite places. One is Okinawa, and second is my room. I can’t go to Okinawa soon. I have to save money, and make much time. It is hard, but if I go there, I will be glad and heal my hart very much. Okinawa to the contrary, I can go to my room anytime. I am in my room everyday. My room's atmosphere is only one in the world so I like them. A common point is those are quiet place and When I am there, I can be calm and forget my troubles.

I have gone to Okinawa three times. I want to go to Okinawa more, but it is a little far from Kumamoto. I like the view and climate of the Okinawa . There are beautiful blue sky and gigantic columns of clouds. Okinawa's sea is clear and it is beautiful, but I have never swum in Okinawa. If I go to Okinawa next time, I will swim in Okinawa. A comfortable breeze often blow in Okinawa. I like exposing myself to the wind. The breeze makes me happy. When I am in Okinawa, and watching the view, I can forget my troubles.

My room is also quiet place. Sometimes I listen to music I like. There are big cushion and cute stuffed I like. I often sleep on the cushion. I like reading comics, and there are many comic books that I like in my room. When I am in my room, I do nothing but read comic books. I often read comic books listening to music. When I am in my room, I am surrounded by many things that I like and I can forget my troubles.

I have two places that I like. Both of them are quiet place. When I am in both of them, I can forget my troubles. I can forget my troubles by watching Okinawa’s beautiful view or reading comic books listening to music. These places are necessary for me.

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Revise essaeys 2-1a-b Favorite place

I have two favorite places. One is Okinawa, and second is my room. I can’t go to Okinawa soon. I have to save money, and make much time. It is hard, but if I go there, I will be glad and heal my hart very much. Okinawa to the contrary, I can go to my room anytime. I am in my room everyday. My room's atmosphere is only one in the world. I like them. A common point is those are quiet place and When I am there, I can be calm and forget my troubles.

I have gone to Okinawa three times. I want to go to Okinawa more, but it is a little far from Kumamoto. I like the view and climate of the Okinawa . There are beautiful blue sky and gigantic columns of clouds. Okinawa's sea is clear and it is beautiful, but I have never swum in Okinawa. If I go to Okinawa next time, I will swim in Okinawa. A comfortable breeze often blow in Okinawa. I like exposing myself to the wind. The breeze makes me happy. When I am in Okinawa, and watching the view, I can forget my troubles.

My room is quiet place. Sometimes I listen to music I like. There are big cushion and cute stuffed I like. I often sleep on the cushion. I like reading comics, and there are many comic books that I like in my room. When I am in my room, I do nothing but read comic books. I often read comic books listening to music. When I am in my room, I am surrounded by many things that I like and I can forget my troubles.

I have two places that I like. Both of them are quiet place. When I am in both of them, I can forget my troubles. I can forget my troubles by watching Okinawa’s beautiful view or reading comic books listening to music. These places are necessary for me.

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2-01a

I like two favorite places.

One is Okinawa. I have gone to Okinawa three times. I want to go to Okinawa more, but it is little far from Kumamoto. I like the view of Okinawa. There are beautiful blue sky and gigantic columns of clouds. What is more, Okinawa's sea is clear and it is beautiful, but I have never swum in Okinawa. If I go to Okinawa next time, I will swim in Okinawa. The view of Okinawa makes me happy and calm. A comfortable breeze often blow in Okinawa. I like exposing myself to the wind. The breeze also makes me happy. I especially want to go to Okinawa in winter, because I have poor circulation and don't like winter season. Okinawa is always hot. I also like climate of Okinawa. Most people in Okinawa is positive view of life and sunny personality. I can makes friends easily in Okinawa. A shopping district in Okinawa is lively and fun. Okinawa's atmosphere is good.

Second is my room. My room is not clear. There are many things in my room. But I like it. If my room is simple or nothing, I will not be able to feel at home. There are big cushion and cute stuffed I like. I like reading comics, and there are many comic books that I like in my room. When I am in my room, I do nothing but read comic books. I often read comic books listening to music. When I am in my room, I am surrounded by many things that I like and I can do what I want to do. My room is gloomy. Of course, a writing desk is well lighted. My room with a cozy ambience.

I have tow places that I like. Both of them are good place. Each places have each merits. I can't go to Okinawa soon. I have to save money, and make much time. It is hard, but if I go there, I will be glad and heal my hart very much. Okinawa to the contray, I can go to my room soon. I am in my room everyday. My room's atmospher is only one in the world!


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1a-b out line

l Favorite Place
l Climate
Ø Hot
Ø Wind
² Cool wind
² Strong wind
Ø Fine
l View
Ø Blue sky
² Cumulonimbus
Ø Blue sea
Ø nature
l Sound
Ø noise
² Sound of wave
² Sound of wind

1a-a Brainstorm

Favorite Place

-relax
-enjoy
-not simple
-gloomy
-not quiet
-flesh air
-good smell
-fine view
-Huton
-comfortable
-feel at home
-wind