2009年12月23日水曜日
Speaking☆Other group idea
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Speaking☆My group's project idea
Then many girls students answered they want to increase more healthy menu in KGU student cafeteria. Many girls students are on diet and want to lose their weight. Now there are no healthy menu. Populrer menu by girls students are Tantanmen, Ichizenhayasi and Udon all of which were low calorie food. But girls students want more low calorie food. So our idea is increasing healthy menu like a salad or low calorie set meal. A low calorie set meal which is used Japanese food mainly. For example, a fish set meal and Tohu hunburger set meal and so on.
Then many students want KGU student cafeteria to low the price of menu. The popular menu's price were 400~500yen. If we eat them about three times a week, we must pay 4800~6000yen for a month. It is expensive for student. We asked students What KGU student cafeteria's menu do you eat most frequent? Boys student answered Sutaminadon, Katsu raice and Katsu carry. Girls students answered Ichizenhayashi, Tantanmen and Udon. Katsu rice and Sutaminadon and Ichizenhayashi and Udon are relatively low price. But the price of menu are expensive. When I went to Kumamoto university's student cafeteria, I saw cafeteria's menu. Then I was surprised, because the price of menu were cheap. Kumamoto university's student cafeteria is about 30~50 yen lower than KGU student cafeteria. It is difficult to cost down, but if it can do it, many KGU students will be glad and cafeteria more enlived.
Although we want KGU student cafeteria to improve more, many KGU students like KGU student cafeteria, and often go KGU student cafeteria.
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2009年12月22日火曜日
Essay 2-03b
When I was high school student, I studied English. I was belong to English club. I spoke with an international student in English at English club. I was also exchanging letters with some Americans who study Japanese in American high school. I began to study English more through this English club. When I was in second of high school student, I took a semi-second of English license examination. But I couldn’t get a semi-second of English license. I lost confidence in my English. After that when I was in third year of high school, I especially study English hard to take an entrance examination. After the entrance examination, I took English licensing examination again. Although I couldn’t get a semi-second English examination, I took a second of English examination. When I am qualified second of English license, I was glad. Then I studied English actively. I took part in English speech contest. I felt English pronunciation is difficult again, so practiced English speech with a teacher many times. It is good memory.
Now, I study English at KGU everyday. Writing, speaking, reading. I speak English at speaking class. It is interesting. I write English at writing class. Sometimes writing English difficult, but it is good for me. I read an English language newspaper at reading class. Many teachers teach me English kindly, but my English skill is not so well. I have to study English harder.
Second, I want to write about French. When I was in my first year at KGU, I learned French for the first time. French is different from English. Pronunciation, grammar and French words. Studying French was difficult for me. I learned French step by step. I didn’t like studying French at first. But the more I study French, the more I could understand French. So I came to like studying French. Needless to say, I study French all night the day before the exam. But it is good memory.
I have learned two languages so far. Learning language is not easy for me. But the more I study language, the more I like studying language. Now I study only English. But if I have a time, I want to study French again. In these days of globalization, learning language is important, and useful for us.
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BR 2-08 "Marty and the magazine Maga"
Joe and Marty had been friends since they were small, but Marty thought Joe something had changed now. He is not what he was. Marty met Joe at school and Joe said to Marty "Hi" and Marty said "Hi" back, but he didn't feel like talking to Joe. He felt He was talking to someone he didn't know. Then Joe was no longer Marty's friend.
I hoped Joe and Marty make up, but it didn't. I felt sad. This is sad and painful story, but I sympathized with Marty. I have felt my good friend changed, and she is not what she was. I felt sad and don't want to talk the friend. I think a person continue to be change with growing, and it is good change or bad change. If I and you felt our friend changed bad way, we should say "You are wrong," If there are a close bond of friendship, we will be able to say it and friend will understand. I thought Marty shoud have said Joe "You are wrong, I don't want you to lift!" Although I understand Marty's feelings, Marty should help Joe if they are truth fiends and Marty likes Joe.
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2009年12月20日日曜日
Kagoshima
After we ate breakfast, we got ready. We made up for an hour. When we left our room, I felt sad. Although I stayed only overnight, I made many memories in this room. This room is comfortable, I like this room.
We decided to go to Kagoshima aquarium last night, so we went to Kagoshima aquarium. Kagoshima aquarium is near the hotel, so we arrived there soon. When we went to an entrance of Kagoshima aquarium, Kagoshima aquarium opened. It was good timing. There was a big shark called Jinbei zame and there were many kinds of fish in a big water plant. Jinbei zame was so big that I was surprised. I looked jinbei zame for a while. I could watch jinbei zame eating fish bait. Contrary to general belief, jinbei zame's fishbait was small, but jinbei zame's mouth was so big. An adult will be able to enter jinbei zame's mouth. To my surprise, jinbei zame that was in a big water plant was a chiled. How big are adult jinbei zame. We were excited and looked at a big water plant for a while. I felt mysterious and thought how wonderful to swim in water for a long time. Then I found a peculiar fish. I said "What's that?" My friend was also surprised and laughted by it and said "Is that a fish? How slender it is!" The creature like a fish was slender and look like a big earthworm. The creature swam oddly. I have never looked such a creature. I was interested in it and wanted to know it's name and This creature is whether fish or not, but I didn't know anything about it. Then we watched many creatures which live in water. I thought there were many creatures that I don't know in the earth. I thought medusan is bautiful for the fast time. They swam in blue water elegantly. A big clib was fearful, but looks delicious. I watched a conger called chinanago. It didn't swim and it was coming up in the sand. It is white and very very slender. I couldn't believe it is a conger. Then I found a model of adult jinbei zame. It was so big that I and friends were surprised. All of us could enter jinbei zame's mouth together easly. We took a picture in jinbei zame's mouth. I want to watch adult jinbei zame in the real. Then we watched a sea turtle's baby. Although a sea turtles are bug, baby was small and cute. I felt pouwer of life. Then I touched a starfish but other friends would not touch a starfish. I took a picture with a starfish. I also touched a sea cucumber. It was black and soft. I was called namako by some people so I felt close to it. Touching a starfish and a sea cucumber was good experience. Thank you a starfish and a sea cucumber. A starfish didn't move at all, so I worried if a starfish was living. It is said "A starfish move very slowly. Although you put a starfish upside down, they can recover. It will took long time to recover." on a sign. "Funny!" everyone said and laughed at it. Then we watched the show of a sea otter. They were so cute and good at swim. A show of a sea otter was interesting. We watched a show of dolphin, too. Many people came to watzh a show of dolphin. Dolphins were so big and they swam fast. Why they understand what human say? They were so clever. A show of dolphin was interesting, too. After a show of dolphin, we went to a souvenir shop. There were many souvenirs of Kagoshima aquarium in souvenir shop. A key ring of dolphin and a sea toter were so cute. We were excited. I bought some key rings. My friends bought many souvenirs in the shop, too.
After we left Kagoshima aquarium, we went to eat lunch. We wanted to eat Kurobuta tonkatsu. So we went to a restaurant that making food of Kagoshima. I ordered a food like a ochazuke which was Kagoshima's food and called Keikadon. I have never eaten and heard, so I worryed if I like it. Other friends ordered a ramen and kurobuta and so on. Every foods were rare food so we were bubbling. Keikadon was delicious and flavor was like a ochazuke. Kurobuta tonkatsu is delisious! I have never eaten such a tonkatsu. This kurobuta tonkatsu have a lot of collagen. We can't eat such a tonkatsu in Kumamoto. Then we ate mango ice cream. We were full and satisfied.
We went sightseeing and bought souvenir. We bought many souvenirs because there are many coted products in Kagoshima. I bought a caramel which taste is a sweet potato. It must be delicious, and a sweet potato pie and a sweet potato talto. I like a sweet potato so I bought many food which tatse is a sweet potato. I bought cookies which shape is Saigou Takamori. Saigou Takamori is from Kagoshima and he is famous as one of people who made Japanese history. We watched his bronze statue in many place of Kagoshima. Saigou Takamori is respected and popular by many people in Kagoshima. My friend bought a clear distilled liquor which called shouchu in Japanese. Kagoshima is famous for shouchu so there were many kinds of shouchu. It is difficult for my friend to decide what kind of shouchu she buy. It took 30 minutes to decide what shouchu she buy. All of us were satisfied with shopping so we returned to Kumamoto. I like Kumamoto but I wanted to stay more in Kagoshima.
We dropped in rest station again. I bought shoronpou again. I love syoronpou. Except for driver, everyone slept in car. When we dropped in rest station second time, driver Riho said "I felt sleep and I want to sleep, too" We were surprised and felt danger so. I bought Minmindaha which is likes a kind of drug to keep awake for Riho. We talked where we travel next time. We are going to travel again.
When we returned to Kumamoto, we were tired but also glad. I thought Kagoshima was good place but also Kumamoto was good place. When I say to my friends good bye, I felt very sad, but we promissed we travel together again.
I had a good time with my best friends for two days. I experienced many things I have never done and watched many things I have never seen and ate many foods I have never eaten. Traveling was good thing. I could make many memoris with best friends. I will never forget this experiences and memories. If I and my friends have free time, I want to travel again!
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2009年12月19日土曜日
Travel to Kagoshima from 12/19~20
It took about 2hours to go to Kagoshima and we enjoyed driving. I like driving on a superhighway because there are some rest stations on the way of a superhighway. There are many delicious local food in rest station. We droped in rest station two times. There were many food which were rare. We were excited and bought many foods.
When I dropped in rest station at the first time, I bought syouronpou which are sold most of rest station and popular by many people. I like syoronpou and I always buy syoronpou when I dropped in rest station. I also bought tenpura in cheese and norimochi. Norimochi is famous for Kagoshima, and it's sauce is very much with mochi and nori. What is more, norimochi is cheap, it is only 80 yen. If you go to Kagoshima's rest station, please buy norimochi!!
When I dropped in rest station second time, I bought a soft ice cream which taste is a sweet potato. If I go to Kagoshima, I decided to eat a soft ice cream which taste is a sweet potato. Sweet potatoes are special product of Kagoshima, so there are soft ice cream which taste is a sweet potato in Kagoshima. I can't easily eat a soft cream which taste is a sweet potato in Kumamoto. When I found a soft ice cream which taste is a sweet potato in Kagoshima's rest station, I was excited and bought it soon. It is delicious, I was satisfied that I came to Kagoshima.
When we arrived at Kagoshima, we got lost. We didn't know where we were and where the hotel which we stay at an inn, so we went to the shrine and asked a man. To my surprise, the hotel is near the shrine. We could found the hotel from the shrine. It took 1 minutes to go to the hotel from the shrine. We were laughed at it.
We arrived hotel at 6;00. When we went in the room, we felt relieved. We drunk a cup of tea. We talked for a short while. Then we were hungry, so we went to eat a dinner. A dinner is Japanese food and looks delicious. We were excited. There were noted product in dinner. Kurobuta, Youkan which taste is sweet, jidori and so on. I thought Kagoshima's taste of food is sweeter than Kumamoto. Kagoshima's syouyu is sweet. We enjoyed dinner. It was good experience.
When we return to our room, two womans were putting a sheet over the futon. We said "Thanks" And two womans said to us "Where did you come from?" We said "We came from Kumamoto," Two womans were surprised and said "Oh really? Your dialect was different from us," I said "Yes, I felt strange because many people's pronunciation is different from me. Did you notice?," A woman said "Yes, of cause. Don't worry. I think your dialect is good," I said "Thank you, I think Kagoshima's dislect is different from Kumamoto but good, too. It is interesting." Then we talked about the difference between Kagoshima and Kumamoto. And we asked a noted place of Kagoshima. They taught us kindly. I could know about Kagoshima, and they could know about Kumamoto, too. It was interesting.
The hotel where we stay is near downtown in Kagoshima. I said "I want to go and see downtown in Kagoshima," Asuka and Akane said "That's a good idea. I want to go to downtown, too," Eri and Riho said "I was tired and want to take a rest. I will stay here," I and Asuka and Akane go to downtown in Kagoshima. Downtown in Kagoshima is smaller than that of Kumamoto and cute. We were excited and enjoyed shopping and sightseeing. I wanted to play at downtown but we had to return to hotel until 11:00 because a hot spring in hotel was be going to close at 11;00 so we returned to hotel at 9;00. When we returned to hotel, we asked some young person where is a convenience store near. Young person taught us kindly, and they said "Where did you came?" I said "We came from Kumamoto," They said "Really? What to do?" I said "To travell" They said "Wow! Please speak something in dialect of Kumamoto," I said "Of cause" and spoke in dealect of Kumamoto, but they didn't understand what I said well and said "It is hard foe me to understand what you said, Kumamoto dialect is deffrent from dialect of Kagoshima but interesting," Isaid "I think so too." We were laughed at it.
After we returned to hotel, Eri and Riho had already taken a hot spring bath and weared Jpanese cloth. We said "Oh cute! Japanese cloth is much you! I want to wear it soon" They said "Thanks, It was good hot spring, You will be relax and recover from the fatigue of your journey," We went to a hot spring soon. The hot spring is not big, but we could be relax and recover from the fatigue of jouney. We enjoyed talking with taking a hot spring bath. After we took a hot spring bath, we went to a convenience store to buy sweets and drinks with a Japanese clothes. It was a cold day and Japanese cloth is thin so we were very cold. Naturally enough, when we arrived a convenience store, a shop assistant looks be surprised. He was glancing us.
After we returned to hotel, we started to party. We ate and drunk a lot. We talked a lot. About when we were child and played volleyball together, our supervisor, our boyfriend, our future and so on. It was interesting. I had a good friends. They are my friends and teammate forever. Then we went to bed at 2;00.
Today, it was a hard schedule so I was tired but interesting. I met many people and experienced many things I have never done and ate many foods I have never eaten. I had a good time and good memories.
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2009年12月16日水曜日
Before I studied English in elementary school, I didn’t even know the alphabet. I learned alphabet with singing alphabet’s music. I like singing alphabet’s music. So I could learn the alphabet soon. Then I studied a basic grammar and some words. The more I study English, the more I was interested in English. I took English licensing examination two times, when I was a junior high school student, I am qualified third grade of English license.
2009年12月14日月曜日
BR 2-07 "The Play"
When I started to read this book, I was surprised. Characteres were Biff and Chip and they went to school with Wilf and Wilma!! Do you know Wilf and Wilma? I read a book "The Weather Vane" as book review 5 before, then Wilf and Wilma appear in the story as main characters. I was surprised. They appear on other story. How popular they are!
Biff and Chip and Wilf and Wilma like Mrs May who are their teacher. Are Wilf and Wilma twins brother? According to picture, it seemed that they took the art class at first, but some people was reading a book and studying. The student even eat something food! How freedom this school. They looks interesting. I want to go to this school.
Then story time have come. The story was The Wizard of Oz. I have read the story and i like it. It is interesting story, and every student listented to The Wizard of Oz. I want to listented to the story together, too. Then play time have come, but there was a storm, so they could not play outside, and Chip and Biff and Wilma played The Wizard of Oz inside. Mrs May liked little play and she put on a play which was The Wizard of Oz. Mrs May is unique teacher, I want to meet her. I know a teacher like Mry May. The teacher likes Mrs May was my teacher when I was a high school student. She is unique teacher, too. She likes play and an event. We scatter parched beans drive out bad luck and call in good luck with classmate and teacher in a gymnasium, and made a chiristmas cake. She is unique teacher and liked by many students. When I read this book, I remembered a teacher when I was a high school student. I want to the teacher again.
Then Wilf's mun helped May. Every students weared each theatrical costumes. Then Wlf's dad helped Mrs May. He painted a house. I have seen Wilf's dad. I thought Wilf's mum and dad is a kind person. Then student's mums and dads came to watch the play which is The Wizard of Oz. Some dad filmed a video. It was real. Many dads and mums will film a video in the real. Then children gave Mrs May some flowers. Mrs May must be glad! I want to go in the story.
When Chip and Biff and Wlma and Wilf go home with their mum and dad, there was a storm, so they said "It's like the play." I thought that's right! It was nice idea.
This is not The Wizard of Oz story, but like The Wizard of Oz. And hot warming story.
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2009年12月6日日曜日
Driving
Then we left Kumamoto for Miyazaki. When we were going to Miyazaki, we found Tuzyunkyou. Do you know Tsuzyunkyou? It is likes a dam and built in the old days. I went to Tsuzyunkyou to learn history when I was 9 years old. So I watched it for a long time. When I looked Tsuzyunkyou, I was suerprosed because it was very big. We were excited. Then we went to on the Tsuzyunkyou. It was high, so I was scared. I can't tell you our fearful and it's height by this picture at all. It was interesting. We also ate yakiimo there. It was delicious and cheap.
Second, we went to Miyazaki to look colored leaves. It took about 2 hours to arrive there. To regretfully, The colored leaves have fallen. But there were a waterfall. We were struck with the grandeur of natur. The air was clear. We breathed in fresh air. Then we found some strange mochi which was broiled. I like Mochi, and interested in it. We asked a question with a person who broiled it. We said "Is this mochi?" A person said "Yes, it is. If you eat it, I'll slather miso sauce on this mochi." We said "Great! It looks delicious! I'll buy it. Four please." Then we ate strange mochi. It was delicious. I have never eaten like this mochi! I wanted to eat more. We had a nice time there.
Then we returned to Kumamoto. And we ate carrie rice in CoCoichi. It was delicious. After that we ate pudding. Today, we ate many delicious foods. Then we went to Kinpou mountain. There were many couples there. I felt a little sad. But a night view was beautiful. Although it was cold, I want to go there again.
I had a nice time.
2009年12月5日土曜日
Go for a drive!
At first, we bought lunch in Macdnald's drive through. There were too many people to buy lunch smoothly. My friends worked at Macdnald. She was looks busy, I admired her. Then I bought Macpork and a apple pie and a cup of tie. Macdnald is delicious and reasonable, so I often go to Macdnald. I always eat Macpork and think Macpork is the best humburgar. What Macdnald's humburger do you like? Do you often go to Macdnald?
Then we enjoyed talking with eating lunch in my friend's car. When we go to Takachiho, we found "Tsujunkyo". I went to "Tsujunkyo" when I was a 9 years old. "Tsujunkyo" is a big dam it was made from many stones. Taujunkyo was built old years ago and wasn't used now. I wanted to see Tsujunkyo again, so I said "I want to go to Tsujunkyo after a long time, Let's go" Hikari and Ayaka said "I have gone to Tsujunkyo befor, too. I want to go there. Let's go!" Then we went to Tsujunkyo. I and Ayaka bought a sweet potato baked in hot pebbles. It is cold day, so a sweet potato baked in hot pebbles felt very hot and delicious. But the sweet potato which we bought was too big to eat it all soon. We walked to Tsujunkyo with eating a sweet potato baked in hot pebbles. Tsujinkyo was so big and old. I felt Tsujunkyo was smaller than before. I felt long Japanese history from Tsujunkyo. We climbed onto Taujunkyo. It was so high that we were excited and could not see around. There are no fence around Tsujunkyo, so it was very dengerous. We got a thrill from Tsujunkyo. Reft side of this post is a picture which I took from the top of Tsjunkyo. I regret that I can't teach you this thrill. If you are interested in Tsujunkyo, please click this link which have information about Tsujunkyo.
We went to Takachiho after we enjoyed seeing Tsjunkyo. It took about 30 minutes to go to Takachiho from Tsujunkyo. When we arrived at Takachiho, there were many people. There was a big waterfall in Takachiho and people can row a boat under the waterfall by paying money. Many couples rowed a boat and looks happy. We wanted to row a boat, but it was a cold day, so we didn't row a boat. If we go to Takachiho in a hot day again, we will row a boat! There were big nature and the air was clear. We breathed fresh air and felt fresh. We enjoyed seeing a view with walking. We found some rice cake which was grilled by a charcoal fire. I like a rice cake and it looked dericious, so we bought a rice cake. The rice cake was fixed on a skewer and put miso on rice cake! Smell is also good. We wait a rice cake finished baking. I talked a worman who baked a rice cake. I said "Do you buy this rice cake in summer, too?" She said "No, I buy this rice cake only in winter, but I buy other food in summer." I said "Oh! really? How food do you buy in summer?" She said "It is difficult to explain, but it is delisious and famous by many people, too." I said "I want to eat it! I will come here in winter again and eat it!" Then a rice cake have been baked and we ate it with seeing a view of colored leaves. It was delicious. I have never eaten such a rice cake. If you go to Takachiho, please eat it!
After eating a rice cake, we went to a souvenir shop. There were many souvenir goods of a local area in the souvenir shop. Takachiho is in Miyazaki, so there were mango chips and chicken and Higashikokubaru prefecture goods in the shop. Every goods were no in Kumamoto. We bought smoked chicken in the shop. It looks delicious and reasonable. Then we ate it in my friend's car. I don't like a smoked chicken because a smoked chicken was hard. I can good examination because chicken was famous as a noted product.
Then we went to Kumamoto. When we arrived at Kumamoto, we were hangry, so we went to Sushiich, but there were too many people to eat soon. We went to Cocoichi next time. We ate curry and rice. I ate curry and rice with chicken! Today, I ate many chicken! After dinner, we ate dessert! I ate ice cream, Ayaka and Hikari ate pudding. We were satisfied.
Today, we went to many places and made many memories and eat many things. I had a good time. I want to went for a drive with Ayaka and Hikari again.
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BR 2-06 "Everyone Got Wet"
This is interesting book. Not only story but also pictures are interesting. We must look pictures carefly. Main characters are only five people, but many other characters apper. Who are they? It is wonder but interesting. If you read this book, please look pictures cerefuly.
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2009年12月2日水曜日
To Kill a Mockingbird
To Kill a Mockingbird
I watched To Kill a Mockingbird in a class. I haven't known Kill a Mockingbird before then. I heard To Kill a Mockingbird is one of a good literary work in America. To Kill a Mockingbird is read as a textbook, so most of Americans know it.
To Kill a Mockingbird is written about racial discrimination which have done the South. I knew there are racial discrimination in America, but I didn't know how it is. So I was shocked by the movie, When I watched To Kill a Mockingbird. I thought this is a deep story. I could know about racial discrimination a little. But I will not be able to understand about all of racial discrimination forever. The important thing is a feelings we want to understand or know racial discrimination and we must not do like that forever.
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We can know not only racial discrimination but also simple life of the South. This movie has the flavor of the South and interesting.
Please watch To Kill a Mockingbird. This is a movie which we should watch at least a once time in a lifetime.
2009年11月29日日曜日
Essey 2-03a
First, I want to write about English. First English lesson is learning the alphabet. I didn’t know even the alphabet. I learned alphabet with singing alphabet’s music. I like singing alphabet’s music. So I could learn the alphabet soon. Then I studied a basic grammar and some words. The more I study English, the more I was interested in English. I took English licensing examination two times, when I was a junior high school student, I am qualified third grade of English license.
When I was high school student, I studied English. I was belong to English club. I spoke with an international student in English at English club. When I was in third year of elementary school, I especially study English hard to take an entrance examination. After the entrance examination, I took English licensing examination. When I am qualified second of English license, I was glad. Then I studied English actively. I took part in English speech contest. I felt English pronunciation is difficult again. I practiced English speech with teacher many times. It is good memory.
Now, I study English at KGU everyday. Writing, speaking, reading. I speak English at speaking class. It is interesting. I write English at writing class. Sometimes writing English difficult, but it is good for me. I read an English language newspaper at reading class. Many teachers teach me English kindly. But my English skill is not so well. I have to study English harder.
Second, I want to write about French. When I was in my first year at KGU, I learned French for the first time. French is different from English. Pronunciation, grammar and French words. Studying French was difficult for me. I learned French step by step. I didn’t like studying French at first. But the more I study French, the more I could understand French. So I came to like studying French. Needless to say, I study French all night the day before the exam. But it is good memory.
I have learned two languages so far. Learning language is not easy for me. But the more I study language, the more I like studying language. Now I study only English. But if I have a time, I want to study French again. In these days of globalization, learning language is important, and useful for us.
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2009年11月27日金曜日
BR 2-05 "The Weather Vane"
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2009年11月23日月曜日
BR2-04 "June's New Car"
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2009年11月17日火曜日
BR2-03 The Scarf
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2009年11月11日水曜日
Happy wedding!
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First, Disney's information are pasted on top of the Disneyland website. The size of Disney’s information is smaller than that of Disneyland, but there are many fun menus, and put many Disney characters. We can watch some Disney short movies. The short movies are about a new Disney movie or many Disney movies. Although the movies are very short, it is fun and can enjoy it. There is a recipe section. Many food's pictures are pasted, and we click the food picture which we want to eat. Then, the recipe for the food is appear, so we can make the food which is like princess eating. We can also buy Disney goods on the website. There are cute Disney goods picture on it. These are pasted too many to choose. What is more, we can play Disney game on the website. There are five kinds of games. Puzzle, quiz, ball game, adventure game, shooting game. It is fun. We can enjoy it.
Second, Disneyland information is main, so pasted big. We can make a reservation Disneyland hotel and buy tickets thorough the Disneyland website. So it is useful. There are a lot of information about Disneyland. For example, information that Halloween party will be held in Disneyland soon. You can get free admission, if you go to Disneyland on your birthday. We can explore many Disneyland spots through Disneyland website. Disneyland Park, Disney's California Adventure Park, Downtown Disney district. All of them are looks exciting. I have never been to Disneyland, but I really want to go there! I think this Disneyland website is useful. There are many funny information on this website.
Disney and Disneyland give many people many dreams. People all over the world admire many Disney characters. So this website is also like a dreamland. Many people love Disney, and if you also love Disney, I recommend you this website. Disneyland website will become useful for you.
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2009年11月10日火曜日
BR 2-02
BAKING DAY
first, title's name is BAKING DAY. There are a pig's family. One day, it is a rainy and cold day. Mother said "I will make you a sand cake" Then Oliver and Amanda help mother cooking. There are some illustrates which they are cooking. When I was reading this book, I was very hungry, so these illustrate are looks delicious. They wait with smelling the smell of baking cookies. Oliver said, "I'm happy now." His mothuer said "Why are you happy?" "Because you are here and Amanda is here" said Oliver. When I read this sentence, my hart was worm like cookies. Although it is rainy and cold day, their house and hart was hot like a sunny. I envy this family. But I thought where is father? He is working? They made his cookie?
A BAD DAY
Second, title's name is A BAD DAY. Oneday, Oliver was building a road with his toys. It had bridges and tunnels and a gus station and a parking lot. He enjoyed it. Then Amanda came to him, and picked up Oliver's racing car. Oliver said "No!" Amanda began to cry. Father who was looking that scolded Oliver kindly. And he suggested Oliver lent Amanda his car. But Oliver said "No" Because he was thinking all cars are for him. Then Oliver wasn't kind to Amanda. One day, father said Oliver and Amanda "Maybe some supper will help." There is a supper Oliver likes the best. He ate a lot. But Amanda wouldn't eat at all. He worried Amanda, and put some foods on Amanda's plate. Amanda was so happy, and ate a lot. His mother and father also become happy. This is also hart warmong story.
GRANDMOTHER'S VISIT
Third, title's name is GRANDMOTHER'S VISIT. One day, the letter from grand mother reached Oliver's family. The letter was written that she will visit Oliver's house today intime for supper. Then mother and Oliver and Amanda prepare for welcome to grandmother. They clean Grandmother's room, put a book and a stuffed toy elephant by the bed. Oliver and Amanda picked floweres from garden, and put them by grandmother's bed. Then Grandmother visited their home. Oliver cooked for grandmother. She said "Thank you Oliver, this is delicious." Oliver glad to hear that. Then Oliver and Amanda had a nace time with their grandmother.
This book is a heart warming story. Pictures are cute. I like this one. This is not Oliver but Oliver pig! It is unique and interesting.
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2009年11月1日日曜日
Speeking Booooooom
Many comedians compete each other in entertainment world everyday. Most of comedians are funny and set the audience laughing with their jokes. They make us happy, but some comedians who plaied on active role in the entertainment world temporarily is called a single shot person. Single shot person is called "ippatuya" in Japanese. I wish they appear on TV again.
Which comedian do you like? I like Culeam sityu because they are from Kumamoto and they are smart and their talk is interesting. I think this is the best season for Hannya and ordrea. Hannya's joke is interesting. And Kanada is a nice guy so he is a popular with young people. My friend Chisako she likes Kanada very much. Kanada have come to Mitsui grean land which is in Arao, and Chisako and Hikari went to Mitsui grean land to see Kanada. They left thier home at early morning, but there were many people who come to grean land to see Kanada. ordrea is olso interesting comedians. Especially Kasuga is an unique character, so Kasuga is also popular with young people. I like Kasuga because he is a cool guy. He doesn't have sideburns now but if he has long sideburns, he will become cooler guy. I wish hannya and ordrea survive in entertainment world.
In those days of recession, many people need laughing. comedian set the audience laughing with thir jokes. I wish comedy boom continue forever.
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2009年10月31日土曜日
esseys 2-01c
I have gone to Okinawa three times. I want to go to Okinawa more, but it is a little far from Kumamoto. I like the view and climate of the Okinawa . There are beautiful blue sky and gigantic columns of clouds. Okinawa's sea is clear and it is beautiful, but I have never swum in Okinawa. If I go to Okinawa next time, I will swim in Okinawa. A comfortable breeze often blow in Okinawa. I like exposing myself to the wind. The breeze makes me happy. When I am in Okinawa, and watching the view, I can forget my troubles.
My room is also quiet place. Sometimes I listen to music I like. There are big cushion and cute stuffed I like. I often sleep on the cushion. I like reading comics, and there are many comic books that I like in my room. When I am in my room, I do nothing but read comic books. I often read comic books listening to music. When I am in my room, I am surrounded by many things that I like and I can forget my troubles.
I have two places that I like. Both of them are quiet place. When I am in both of them, I can forget my troubles. I can forget my troubles by watching Okinawa’s beautiful view or reading comic books listening to music. These places are necessary for me.
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2009年10月30日金曜日
Essey2-02a website
First, Disney's informations are pasted on top of the website. It's size is smaller than that of desnyland, but there are many fun menus, and disney characters. We can watch some desney's short movies. The short movies are about a new disney movie or many disney movies. Although the movies are very short, it is fun and can enjoy. We also listen to music. There are recip's special section. Many food's pictures are pasted, and we click the food which we want to eat. Then, the racipe for the food is appear, so we can make the food which is like princess eating. We can also buy disney goods on the website. There are cute disney goods picture on it. These are pasted too many to choose. What is more, we can play disney game on the website. There are five kinds of games. It is fun. We can enjoy it.
Second, Disneyland's information is main, so pasted big. We can make a reservation disneyland hotel and buy tickets thorough the website. It is usuful. There are many informations about disneyland. For example, information that Hlloween party will be held in disneyland soon. You can get free admission, if you go to disneyland on your birthday. We can explore many spots through the website. Disneyland Park, Disney's california Adventure Park, Downtown Disney Distrikt. All of them are looks exciting. I have never been to Disneyland, but I really want to go there! I think this disneyland website is usuful. There are many funny informations on this website.
Disney and Disneyland give many people many dreams. Many disney characters are admired by many people all over the world. So this website is also like a dreamland. We can be excited only watch this website and enjoy. This website is good.
http://disneyland.disney.go.com/disneyland/en_US/home/home?name=HomePage
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2009年10月28日水曜日
2-02a
inclide page title and URL
your initial impressions
2Draft essay posts 2-02a
Labels: drafts esseys genre reviews websites
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2009年10月21日水曜日
Revise essaeys 2-1a-b Favorite place
I have gone to Okinawa three times. I want to go to Okinawa more, but it is a little far from Kumamoto. I like the view and climate of the Okinawa . There are beautiful blue sky and gigantic columns of clouds. Okinawa's sea is clear and it is beautiful, but I have never swum in Okinawa. If I go to Okinawa next time, I will swim in Okinawa. A comfortable breeze often blow in Okinawa. I like exposing myself to the wind. The breeze makes me happy. When I am in Okinawa, and watching the view, I can forget my troubles.
My room is quiet place. Sometimes I listen to music I like. There are big cushion and cute stuffed I like. I often sleep on the cushion. I like reading comics, and there are many comic books that I like in my room. When I am in my room, I do nothing but read comic books. I often read comic books listening to music. When I am in my room, I am surrounded by many things that I like and I can forget my troubles.
I have two places that I like. Both of them are quiet place. When I am in both of them, I can forget my troubles. I can forget my troubles by watching Okinawa’s beautiful view or reading comic books listening to music. These places are necessary for me.
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Thank you for comments everybady!
thank you for comments. I also think Okinawan dilect is interesting. I want you to go to Okinawa soon!
>>Yuribooooh
Thank you for comments. I don't feel lonely. Because I can read many comic books, and it is fun!
>>aya
Thank you for camments.
Oh! did you write about your room? How do your room looks like? I want to read it!
>>chisako
I think Tyuraumi suizokukann is the best spot in Okinawa. It is the biggest aquarium in Japan, and also watch beautiful sea from there. Please go there!
Light>>If we can graduate from KGU,and get a job, let's go to Okinawa together! I'm looking forward to do it.
Pika>>Thank you forcomments. I ate umibudou. It is unuseful food. It eat with Ponu. I like it, but it is only Okinawa. If you go to Okinawa, please eat it!
Sayaka>>Oooooh! Sorry, Sayaka. I have some Okinawa's picture, and I should have paste it on my blog essay. I have forgotten quite! Thank you for idea and advice.
Saki>>Hi Saki! Thank you for comment. I recommend you going to Turaumi aquarium. You will feel be struck by the grandeur of sea and life.
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2009年10月10日土曜日
Speeking About Kana!
Now I will talk about Kana's family. There are 5 people in her family. She is oldest daughter. Her father is a teacher. He teaches about personal computer. I said "I envy you because she can be taught about personal computer when you trouble with personal computer. Although I often use a personal conmuter I don't use my computer well, so If I have a father like yours I will not worry about personal computer" Kana said "You are wrong. I don't be taught about personal cpmputer by my father because I have a quarrel with my father" Then her father's hobby is playing tennis. It is very cool, but Kana have never played tennis. Kana's father is cool.
Her mother is a care worker. She works hard everyday and she is a hard worker. Her hobby is flower arrangement. It is very good hobby. Kana make flower arrangement sometimes, too. Kana made flower arrangement for her mother. I saw it, and it was very cute and hot warming. I want to flower arrangement. Kana's mother is also good person.
She has two younger sister. One of them likes painting a picture, and she is good at painting a picture. Her dream is being a painter. Kana says "My sister is a Otaku." I have met Kana's sister and I thought she looks like a painter! Kana's sister don't resemble to Kana at all and also looks like a kind person. Kana's sister go to college to study about paint in this spring. If she become a painter, I want her to paint my portrait.
Other younger sister is belong to wind instrument music club. She plays the flute. She is good at playing the flute. I have never played the flute, but I want to play the flute. The woman who plays the flute is beautiful and cute. I want Kana's sister to teach me how to play the flute. I have met Kana's sister, she resembles to Kana very well, but she is a kind different from Kana.
Every Kana's family have each hobby and enjoy it. Kana's family is interesting and I like them.
Second I will talk about Kana's university life. She comes to school by bike. It takes about 20 minutes. She comes to school by bus on a rainy day. Her house is near to school, but Kana always say "My house is far from KGU, so it is hard for me to go to school" and I always say "Kana! You are wrong! Listen to me! It takes an hour or an hour and half minutes to go to KGU! My house is farer than yours"
Kana is belongs to club which is called Viva. Viva research on Beverly Hills, and Kane is interested in Beverly Hills. Viva active on every Wednesday, and she takes part in club activity every week. She likes her club and enjoy club activity. I think Viva is a mysterious club. If I have a free time, I want to take part in Viva's club activity.
She warks as a secretary assistance at KGU, so she always works and busy. She has to take part in events on the school, and help management. A chief secretary is cool guy, so I envy her.
Kana is a cool and cute. She enjoy her school life and I will get along with her forever. I am glad to become a friend with Kana.
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2009年10月7日水曜日
2-01a
One is Okinawa. I have gone to Okinawa three times. I want to go to Okinawa more, but it is little far from Kumamoto. I like the view of Okinawa. There are beautiful blue sky and gigantic columns of clouds. What is more, Okinawa's sea is clear and it is beautiful, but I have never swum in Okinawa. If I go to Okinawa next time, I will swim in Okinawa. The view of Okinawa makes me happy and calm. A comfortable breeze often blow in Okinawa. I like exposing myself to the wind. The breeze also makes me happy. I especially want to go to Okinawa in winter, because I have poor circulation and don't like winter season. Okinawa is always hot. I also like climate of Okinawa. Most people in Okinawa is positive view of life and sunny personality. I can makes friends easily in Okinawa. A shopping district in Okinawa is lively and fun. Okinawa's atmosphere is good.
Second is my room. My room is not clear. There are many things in my room. But I like it. If my room is simple or nothing, I will not be able to feel at home. There are big cushion and cute stuffed I like. I like reading comics, and there are many comic books that I like in my room. When I am in my room, I do nothing but read comic books. I often read comic books listening to music. When I am in my room, I am surrounded by many things that I like and I can do what I want to do. My room is gloomy. Of course, a writing desk is well lighted. My room with a cozy ambience.
I have tow places that I like. Both of them are good place. Each places have each merits. I can't go to Okinawa soon. I have to save money, and make much time. It is hard, but if I go there, I will be glad and heal my hart very much. Okinawa to the contray, I can go to my room soon. I am in my room everyday. My room's atmospher is only one in the world!
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1a-b out line
l Climate
Ø Hot
Ø Wind
² Cool wind
² Strong wind
Ø Fine
l View
Ø Blue sky
² Cumulonimbus
Ø Blue sea
Ø nature
l Sound
Ø noise
² Sound of wave
² Sound of wind
Speaking
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1a-a Brainstorm
-relax
-enjoy
-not simple
-gloomy
-not quiet
-flesh air
-good smell
-fine view
-Huton
-comfortable
-feel at home
-wind
2009年9月29日火曜日
Speaking☆Who am I?
I talked Michel. She is from Europe. Her job is car designer. It is cool, too. She likes judo, so I said "You likes judo? Cool! I don't know judo much. Do you have dan?" She said "I don't have dan. I have never played judo." I was surprised, and said "Why do you like judo?" She said "Because judo is cool, and I like watching it! When I watch it, I am excited." She hate dogs. When she was child, she was bitten by a dog, so she hate dogs. She can't touch dogs. She is good person.
I also talked Marco. He is from German. He is a firmer. I said "That's grate! Why did you become a firmer?" He said "I like growing floweres and vegetables!". He also likes football. He often plays football. He has many hobbies. He hate meat. He likes vegitables. He is a vegitalian. He said "Vegitables are deliciouse and good for our body! People should eat it more." He was glowing with good health. He is a nice person.
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Speaking
I think sky diving is more danjerous, because bungee jumping is known where people landed. So bungee jumping can put cushioning on the ground, but sky diving is not known where people landed. Sky diving use a parachute, but it is not safe. I saw some people who dead in parachute accident. For the reasons I think Skaydiving is more dangerous.
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I think winter sports is better, because many people fat in winter, so we can lose weight by playing sports. What is more, winter is cold, but we can become warmer. Playing sports is also good for our body, but, sometimes danjerous. Many people become dehydration every year in summer. We may lose our lives. For the reasons I think winter sports is better.
3
I think a boy for my first child is better, because a man must be a steady to have family to keep. Generally speaking, many oldest son or oldest daughter is more steady than second son and second daughter. For the reasons I think a boy for my first child is better.
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I think using mixi and facebook is better, because we can learn with enjoy by them. Texting is also ok, but mixi and facebook is more interesting than texting. We must like studying. For the reason I think using mixi and facebook is better.
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Summary
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2009年9月27日日曜日
planetarium
men for about ten minutes.
First, we were hungry, so ate ramen. The ramen we ate is called Hakata ramen. Hakata ramen is a filling dish, and delicious. We lined up to eat Hakata ramen for about ten minutes.
Then we went to game center to play. We took a print club, and played a crane game. I got cute mascots which are called Mamechiba. They are round face and look like a dog. Also my friends got some mascots. My friend Nozome, she likes rirakkuma and got many rirakkuma. She looks happy.
Finaly, we went to planetarium, but planetarium is closed. We should have gone there earlier. We dropped in STARBUCKS COFFEE on our way home. Everybady know STARBUCKS COFFEE's coffee and dessert are delicious. I ordered Caramel makiart. It is sweet and I like it. My friends ordered a cheese cake. It is delicious, too. Although she doesn't like cheese cake, STARBUCKS COFFEE's cheese cake like very much. When I knew she likes only STARBUCKS COFFEE's cheese cake, I was surprised, and could'nt understand.
Although we could not go to planetarium, we had a nice time. I want to go to planetarium next time.
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2009年8月27日木曜日
Volt
After we wtched a movie, I went to Daimonji to eat okonomiyaki. I ordered okonomiyaki which is in cheese and meat. Haruna ordered okonomiyaki which is in Natto and moch! I was surprised and said "What!? Is it delicious?" Haruna said "Yes, this is delicious. I want you to eat this one." I said "Sorry, Haruna. I like Natto, but I would not like Okonomiyaki with natto. I can't believe."
2009年8月26日水曜日
ASOOOOOO
2009年8月20日木曜日
BR2-01
A heroine is Emma. She is a rich girl and has everything. But she doesn't have friends and her mother dead in a traffic accident when she was young. So she always feels miss.One day, she met Anne in the party. They are same age, and became good friends soon. Emma knew everything about Anne. Anne loves a boy who is a farmer. The boy's name is Tom. Tom is kind and good person. but when Emma heard that, she wasn't interesting. Emma thought Tom is not much Anne because he is a famer and not rich. So Anne will not be able to become happy. One day, Anne hear Anne was proposed from Tom. She said Anne "Tom is not much you, and you should refuse it" So Anne have refused Tom's propose. Then Emma looks for a man who is much Emma. She find a much person. His name is Mr Elton. He is a rich person and he is often invited to Emma's home party, so she thought she can meet Anne even Anne get married and can became happy. So Emma try to they get married. But unfortunatelly Mr Elton wanted to marry Emma because she is a rich, and he proposed her. Of course she refused it. Then Emma is in love with Frank. He is interesting and handsome. But she have never met him. She often hear about him from her relative Mrs Sindy. Emma hear Frank is going to visit this town to meet Mrs Sindy. Emma is so happy. Then Emma meet him. They became a good friends soon. Emma got to thought I like him, but I don't love him! And Emma noticed she loves Mr Smith. Mr Smith is cool and often advise Emma. However she noticed Anne also loves Mr Smith. But Mr Smith propose of marriage to Emma. Emma say "Yes" Mr Smith is surprised and said "I was thinking you love Frank" Emma said "Certainly he is a good person and I like him. But I don't love him" Then they hugged each other. But Emma worried about Anne. What sould she say Anne about this. A few days later, Anne suggest to Anne travel to England. Emma knew Anne likes travelling. Then Anne travel to England. A few days later, Anne return home and comes to Emma's house and said Emma excitedly "Hi Emma! I met Tom in England and he loved still me" Emma was surprising. They decided to get married. Emma is pleased. Now Emma thought Tom is much for Anne and she must be able to be happy! Then two weddingceremonys were hold in same place at same time.
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2009年8月13日木曜日
Travel to Nagasaki on second day
Then we return to my friend's house, we watched high school baseball on TV. Nagasaki's team have just played a match game. It was interesting game, but we had to return our home. So we left my friend's house. I felt sad, but I said my friend "Thank you for two days. I was glad to meet you, and I am looking forward to meet you again. See you"
I had a nice time.
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2009年8月12日水曜日
☆Nagasaki☆
My friend said "What do you want to do?" I said "I am hungry and I want to eat saseboburger." My friend said "OK! I know a delisious saseboburger's restaurant." Then we went to restaurant to eat a delicious saseboburger. Saseboburger looks like humburger, but it is filling. It was delicious. Then we went to friend's house. My friend has many dogs, and I played with a puppy. A puppy was very cute and cheerfully.
Then we went to Direx and Maruei to buy supper. We bought sushi at Maruei. We also bought liqour. After shopping, my friend said "Do you know Inasa mountain?" I said "No I don't. Why?" My friend said "Inasa mountain is famouse for a good night view and Inasa mountain's night view is called a million dollar value (hyakumandoru no yakei)" I said "Really? I want to go there, and watch a good night view." My friend said "OK! Let's go from now on" Then we went to Inasa mountain. It took about an hour to go to Inasa mountain by car. It is a little far, but we enjoyed going for a drive. The ascent to the Inasa mountain's top was very steep. To our regret, it rained. What is worse, it was blowing a gale, but there were many people at lookout point. A night of view was very beautiful. I have never seen such a night view. It was a moving sight. I took some pictures but I could not do it well, so this picture is not so beautiful. I regret that I can't show you beautiful night view. If you go to Nagasaki, please go to Inasa mountain.
I watched many Hamakatsu and Lingerhut while we going for a drive. Most of them were located in same place. I said "Why are most of Hamakatsu and Lingerhut in same place?" My friend said "It is proper that many Hamakatsu and Lingerhut in Nagasaki ,because Hamakatsu and Lingerhut originated in Nagasaki. What is more, them top management is same person!" I was surprised!! I think most of people in Kumamoto don't know about it. Do you know about it?
After we arrived my friend's house, we ate sushi. We talked a lot. It was interesting. Then we were tired, so we went to bed soon.
2009年8月11日火曜日
Otamaru☆
About Otanomaruike
Today, I went to Otanomaruike with my friends. It is a big lake in Tamana. It's water is very cool. Otanomaruike is called Otamaru. When we went there, many people was swimming. At first, I could not enter the water because Otamaru's water is so cool. Today was hot, so cold water makes me comfortable. Then we enjoyed swimming. There were many fished in Otamaru. I watched many fishes in water. Fishes were small and cute.
Then, we went to Joyfull to eat lunch. We swam and played as hard as possible, so we were hungry. I ate a humburger and salad and rice. I was hungry, so felt delicious.
Then we went to my friend's house and spent comfortably listening to music.
Swimming in Otamaru was fun, and spending my friend's house was comfortable. I had a nice time. I want to go there again.
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2009年8月7日金曜日
Taman fireworks display!!
Then fireworks were displayed from 8;00 to 9;00. Fireworks are displayed 9000 bombs. The number of fireworks is the most in Kumamoto. Everyone was glued to fireworks. I was watching fireworks with eating a shaved ice. Fireworks was beautiful, but it is fallen soon. I felt happy, but also felt evanescence. Many kinds of fireworks were displayed. I enjoyed watching fireworks.
On Tamana fireworks display day, I can meet many friends who I haven't seen for a long time. When I found a friend of mine, I was exciting. I said "Hi! Long time no see. I am glade to meet you!" We talked a lot. On Tamana fireworks display day, I can meet many friends. What is more, I can watch beautiful fireworks and eat delicious food, so I like Tamana fireworks. I want to go to other fireworks display. I had a nice time.
2009年8月2日日曜日
Barbecue in Eduko!
About Eduko on the movie
Today, I did barbecue with my friends in Eduko. Eduko is a big lake. Many people enjoy fishing and rowing a boat in Eduko. First, we went to shopping to buy ingredients. Beef, chicken, cabbage onions, eggplant, pumpkin, and ... a long groon onion! Yayoi said "I like a long green onion, so I want to eat it with meat." I was surprised, but said "OK!" Then we went to Eduko. Ther were a barbecue set. We carved ingredients. After we were ready, we did toast. Then everyone enjoyed talking with eating many foods. Many foods were delicious, so we were full. Then we went to sea in Amakusa after the barbecue. We enjoyed playing a sparkler. It was very beautiful, but there were many mosquitoes. A mosquito was humming around my ear and I was bitten by many mosquitoes. I was unpleasant. I should have brought a insect repellent spray.
Today was very fun. I had a nice time. I will enjoy my summer vacation life!
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2009年7月15日水曜日
Student ID:08132
Portfolio for Writing III, Section 1A OR 1C
[Please delete the unsuitable class section and "OR" (above), along with this line of remarks.]
(See: Note 1, below)
0.0. Overview
Reviews, Posts, Words, and More
(See: Note 2, below.)
1.0. Essays
(See: Note 3, below.)
Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).
1.1. Showcase | Short titles with links to blog posts | Dates | ¶ | W | C | L | P | M |
1-01a (2009.04.08) | Dear my host family | 4.8 | 302 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 | |
1-01b (2009.04.20) | Dear my hostfamily | 4.15 | 298 | 7 | 0 | 0 | 0 | |
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1-02a (2009.06.01) | University life | 5.29 | 328 | 3 | 0 | 0 | 0 | |
1-02b (2009.07.06) | University life | 6.20 | 300 | 0 | 0 | 2 | 0 | |
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1-03a (2009.06.29) | Lilo and Stich | 6.29 | 387 | 1 | 3 | 1 | 0 | |
1-03b (2009.07.13) | Lilo&Sitch | 7.11 | 374 | 0 | 2 | 1 | 0 | |
Totals | --- | --- | 1989 | 11 | 5 | 4 | 0 |
Key:
¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post
1.2. Best Essay
Selection and Assessment: Which of those six assigned essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
I think Essay1-03b is the best essay, because this is written about family and friends concisely. So everyone will be able to understand my opinion easily. Than Essay1-03b is made up six paragraphs, and I express my opinion on every paragraphs.
2.0. Comments
Showcase | Titles of posts with links | Dates of comments yyyy.mm.dd | Numbers of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog* | ||||
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog* |
| 23 | I asked about a cake she likes. | |
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog* | 2009.05.29 | 26 | She said her opinion, and also gave me a good advice. | |
2.4. Most comments on: | Titles of posts with link | Dates of posts yyyy.mm.dd | Total number of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
2.4.1. Any one of your essays* |
| 153 | They wrote an unique omments | |
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | 2009.07.01 | --- | --- |
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- |
| I always said"Thank you for a comment", and my opinion. |
2.4.2. Any of your other posts* | 2009.04.19 | 23 | She praised for my blog. | |
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- |
| --- | --- |
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | 38 | I wrote my opinion, and some questions. |
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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes them good comments.
2.5. Recent comments display
Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.
・Recent comments are top of the left side.
2.6. Additional reflections on comments
- I should have responded to comments earlyer.
- I should have written many things on comments.
- I should have asked more on comments.
3.0. Book Reviews
3.1. Showcase | Short titles | Dates: yyyy.mm.dd | Words | Comments |
Example: | 2007.05.16 | 39 | 1 | |
BR 1-01 | BOOK STORE GHOST | 2009.04.14 | 124 | 0 |
BR 1-02 | Good Night, Good Knight | 2009.04.19 | 182 | 1 |
BR 1-03 | The House on the Hill | 2009.04.26 | 106 | 0 |
BR 1-04 | Bears ODD | 2009.05.08 | 53 | 0 |
BR 1-05 | The Egg Hunt | 2009.05.31 | 58 | 0 |
BR 1-06 | Not Again | 2009.06.11 | 168 | 0 |
BR 1-07 | Alice and Lisa | 2009.06.25 | 143 | 0 |
BR 1-08 | Maggie Magpie's Pie | 2009.07.01 | 108 | 0 |
BR 1-09 | The Fox and the Stork | 2009.07.14 | 90 | 0 |
BR 1-10 | Blue and Yellow | 2009.07.14 | 83 | 0 |
BR 1-11 | Speechless with Happiness | 2009.07.14 | 104 | 0 |
BR 1-12 | Japanese culture | 2009.0714 | 81 | 0 |
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Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).
3.2. Best Book Review
Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
I think BR1-06 is the best, because BR1-06 is easy to read. And I write a thing which I was learned by this book. If you read my book review BR1-06, you will want to read that book!
4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media
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4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar? |
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4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar? |
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4.4. Overall presentation
What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.
I put many pictures each blog.
I wrote many words each blog.
I put some links.
5.0. Additional reflections on your blog and your writing for it
Please feel free to include reflections on both class work and homework, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, and reflections).
Using computer is difficult for me. Especially, putting links, making blog is difficult for me.
I was forgetting to do book review in the middle of this semester.
Writing essay was difficult, because we must write essay which consists of six.
6.0. Advice and suggestions for yourself, your peers, and your successors
I found many wrong letters. I must be careful.
I should make more comment on my friend's blog, and I also should respond to my friend's comment.
I should put more links. I must study how to put links.
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Notes:
This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08), and Writing III, §§1a & 1c and Writing IV: Portfolio, §§1a & 1c portfolios (2008-09).
Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 1st (spring) semester PPF first.
The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derived from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).
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License:
This portfolio template is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike 3.0 Unported License. Please attribute to "the Writing Studio Blog" (without quotation marks).